Tuesday, April 7, 2009

Ode to Eilis

i lose track of time as i listen.
these are not stories,
but memories and life's lessons.

i lose track of time as i wonder:
she is so brave,
but does she know?
and does she know that i think so?

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  2. ah brave mikk, i'm honoured that you think me brave, and honoured to be the topic of your poem, when i said 'giviz'a poem it's dublin for give US by which 'us' i meant humanity posterity sorority but cool for me i got a gimme instead of a giviz xxx

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  3. i know it's what you meant :) but i thought i'd write one about you instead! x

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  4. This one is cute..I dont know the girl but still....intriguing poem.

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